That should be “lie” not “lay” in the last panel. The former is the intransitive verb meaning “to assume a horizontal position” whereas the latter is the transitive verb meaning “to place down” (although just to be confusing it’s also the past tense of “lie”).
So? Not every peasant halfling knows what grammar to use when speaking.
nobody cares. you are not being helpful.
it’s good porn, brent
Yeah, that’s always kind of jarring for me too. I always think “Lay what?” for a minute before I figure out it actually is supposed to be “lie.” Alfie’s grammar is correct for the rest of her scenes so her casually using the wrong verb seems out of place.
Gawd bless this page!
That last panel just… WOW! Brain has left the building and mumble-mumble something trouserparts. Once again, stunning work.
(Speaking as someone who owns a pair, thank you *so* much for drawing breasts functioning correctly under the laws of physics. So many artists seem to think that physics is more of a suggestion than a code, really.)
I’m part of an all-female gaming group. We’re of a variety of orientations, we all love your comic, and it is always one of the first topics of conversation when we get together: “Have you seen this week’s Alfie? OHMAGAWDsohot!”
Last panel – who the hell could resist that request?
Anyone have trouble getting here yesterday? Also, amazing as always, though I agree with Anonymous that scale seems a little out of whack. Compare the first panel to the second to last. That said, I’ll gladly take a little scaling issues if it means getting this~
yeah i did
Has Alfie gotten taller? I feel like she’d be nearly 5 feet tall if she stood up
I call dibs on kissing Marco on panel 3. Holy fuck.
Alfie’s on top of the world!
I love the light in this new volume of wonder.
Does Alphie still have unshaved armpits? I hope so. I really liked how natural that made her.
Yeah she’s still unshaved there, but so far there was not a panel where they would be clearly visible.
That last panel is a perfect mix of sexy and cute. <3
YESH. these young adults and their rampant sex drives. If it weren’t for the fact that they can’t have kids by way of being different races, you’d think they were on their honeymoon!
Shit, I love the new look of Alfie
Okay, first of all, I just need to take a moment to appreciate the artistic talent that goes into the expressions in general in this comic! Your characters faces and body language convey so much; I’m just blown away by it on a regular basis!
Secondly, on a related note: panel 6!!
Who could ever say no that?! That facial expression, body language, and even the tone of voice implied by the combination of those two and the specific choice of dialogue would pretty much guarantee a yes from me, almost regardless of what i was feeling before!
Dem toes <3
As much as I love me a short, stacked, freckled redhead, I gotta admit that Alfie is far and away my fav character in this entire comic. Her cute:sexy ratio isnt even a factor. She’s just a gem. Keep up the great work. ^^b
Lemme preface this by saying my comment is meant as a compliment and is not meant to offend anyone in any way.
Now that’s our of the way. I have something to say about the last panel of this page… GOD BLESS YOU INCASE!!! I love her expression soo much. That one line and panel pretty much made the whole scene for me.
I love romance hentai, and even more so I like when the girl takes the lead. I’m not into bdsm but when the woman takes charge its amazing. Thanks for writing such a great comic, keep up the badassery!
I got killed by the comment
Goddamnit, that last panel is too fucking cute. Her FACE—. ♥
Fuck yes, that face!~
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